Reviews for The Sun Rose
sdffds chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
It's such a beautiful poem. So true in so many different ways, if the world was like that, then everything would be perfect.
lymli chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
the imagery is nice, I guess, the last lines (the day is fresh...) are hopeful.

this poem makes me think, life is great and we must enjoy..
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Nice imagery on this poem. Great job!

~Twilight Starr~