Reviews for Addiction |
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![]() ![]() Please, write some more! This story has huge potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm... this story's good, but i have no idea why taking advil and pills is so facinating? advil doesn't even taste good... ; |
![]() ![]() ![]() "5) Hexapod: a pod having six." LOL! I hope you're not weirded out that I reviewed all of your chapters. I just know I feel all giddy when I get reviews so I like to return the feeling. Anyway, it's been a year! What are you doing with this story! I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() dun dun dun |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh alcoholic! *reads next chapter* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch, wince at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can somewhat relate to Piper, which is always helpful when reading a story. Off to read the next :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really,really good. I hope you update soon D |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome job katt, it seems your are getting more comfortable with the story stealing that alcohol was a pretty stupid thing on Bree's account, but i can't wait to see what happens next! great! ~E~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story! u need to update, please! its amazing. i know alot of people with problems like these, so i can relate in a 3rd person sorta way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was a very bold-but stupid-move that Bree made. Awesome story. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome job katt...a few grammar mistakes but hey no one's perfect...i can't wait to see what happens next update soon! ~E~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I really like this so far. You write well, and I like the premise of your story. -Just a couple things, in this chapter, when talking about Rob, Piper says "He only leaves up the block from me so he’ll stop by my house and we’ll walk to school together." I think you mean "lives". Just didn't know if you'd caught it or not. -Another thing, in the previous chapter Bree says "One might ponder" at the end of one paragraph, but then she says it at the end of another. I didn't know if this was a phrase she used often, or if you'd just absentmindedly written the same phrase twice(I do it ALL the time.) Keep writing! I'd love to read more! Cheers! -A. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your story and i can relate to it in so many ways. I used to have a cutting problem, but i love your story and please keep up the good work. One more thing you might want to start re-reading each chapter before you submit it you have some mistakes but other then that its great. ) -Always and Forever, MidnightLust |