Its on wattpad, sorry forgot to mention it.

Great story and sorry to be a bother but anybody whi cares should check out my bestfriends story (sugarbabe1215), swirl. It means alot to her and her birthday is comming up soon and Im trying to boost her popularity a bit. But again, great story

wish there was more I like the guy seems like we listen to the same music lol but I do really like it so try to get more out

Awesome story please write more!

Despiate the errors in the first few chapters I think this story is pretty cute. You have a unquie voice, I'd watch out for adding random sentences too. Update soon :)

Please tell me you are going to continue this story. I just love where it is going so far and you only have three chapters. Please continue.

i like your story, it was funny keep going.

Loved the beginning of this story,

Love the guy tristan too! Just my type, you never can find ir books with guys like this in them, and thought this was great. Hope you continue :)

wow, thats one crazy family. lol but i definitely want to see what happens next!

So are you still debating on this story or what? I quite like how it's going, there are quite a few errors though. But you already know that, so i guess there's no need to point it out. Em, is the guys name Tristan or Tristian? I'm a smidgeon confused by that. Anyway, i like it. I've read the first three parts, so, yes. Hope you continue on with it.

please continue with the story, and update soon please!

interesting! I must say I prefer adonis to this tristan character, but I need more to base my decision off of.

So update! Quick like. :)

Oh my wow! That sounds like something me, my sister, and my mom would do :] Great prologue!

tristain sounds TOO hot, lol. i love snake bites, and eyebrow rings. and his hair! and gosh, his eyes..lol

*drool*

ok, i gotta get a hold of myself,lol.

Too many needless detailed descriptions, like for the school receptionist. Too much retrospect, too little plot line, as if you put more into the background than where you want this to go. Your characters need a 'future' in order to make them interesting. And if you have to rely mainly on profanity to get your point across, it's a sad reflection on your communication skills. There's a lot of potential, but you've got to take more time with this.