Wow. Just wow.
That was so great! I am definitely going to check out any other stories that you have, considering that your writing is better than most people's!

This story is amazing. I love it. I'm do glad that everything turned out for the best. XD

Why is it that in all of your stories someone is getting abused physically and talked down to but isn't smart enough to trust when a guy is good. Great story. :)

This story is freaking amazing. The struggles Alair and Joseph made it through are amazing. At times I had to pause in reading so I wouldn't cry because I became so emotionally attached to Alair. Her struggles are familiar and horrible and I'd wish them upon no one. Though there were moments when I wanted to smack Joseph upside the head and yell at him, he was overall a very likable character as well a great hero.

Reading the first chapters in this stories is just fine. 2 comments: You have issues writing the emotions of the characters and, your transition from one scene to another needs some support (words).

I like the plot but it bothers me that the characters have some inconsistencies especially on this scene/chapter.

I will continue reading and hopefully, I can leave another review for your story.

Good luck.

I like the story so far, but I really hate Nikkole. I hope she disappears.

I don't like Nikkole. She's so clingy, and needy, and annoying! \

I can't belive I haven't read this story before now, it's fantastic! I love the characters and they really evolve througtout the story.

You rock!

I like your writing style so far. I'll be interested to see where this goes.

Hah I can't get enough of this Jett boy ;D. He's such a cutie! His personality is just addicting and I keep laughing at his quirkiness.

Nikki is just insane o.o what a nutjob! I'd flip shit if someone pulled a stunt like that on me! (Not that it's possible, since I'm the chick hah)

I like how it's got a very dark undertone, but with all of the dialogue, you're keeping the mood light for the most part. Nice :)

-continues reading-

Aw cute&swet(:

A couple of times I was furious at jett, but what can a man do? Lol

Great story

sigh... great story. keep the good work up! )

how did jett's parent's die?

I really loved the ending! (the epilogue, not the one where Alaira gets covered in brains after shooting Mitchell (though I did love the action)).

It was an awesomely good story, and I really loved all the action (but Mitchell made me angry a lot).

Keep Writing!

Hugglez & Toodlez

~ Tigery _

WOW! I just read the last two chapters, as I've been a bit busy. I am so sad to see this piece finished, I loved it so much. It was a great story, thank you so much for writing it!

good ending :)