|Reviews for interpretting your goodnight|
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
i love "darling, I stole your heart and you stole mine
the clichéd ‘perfect crime’"
makes me sad
| AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
nice work. i like the last stanza. keep writing
| A Scarlet Raven chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
this is beautiful poem. unfortunately i know this feeling far too well...
| vaudeville summers chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
the fourth stanza strikes me as extrememly powerful - i wish i could find more of such beautiful poetic lines on this site. i love the pet names very much.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Very sad but so true. Din't worrymy dear, just lift that head up, who knows a kinder fellow might just be right there helping you to your feet. Who knows, just don't get too broken this time dear, I've seen you fall too many times and I can't bare to see it happen again so soon. Love ya dear.
| Ryan Schiff chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
I like the repitition of "darling" at the begining of the verses. You may want to proofread for spelling and punculation, for instance the you're in line two is actually your (unless she is a presence that is leaving your sight, which poeticly is completely posable).
There are too many ...s where the should be commas and periods and the final three lines is a weak ending to an otherwise forcefull poem. Otherwise it has the makings for a decent bit of poetry.