|Reviews for one hundred and twenty degrees|
| anqiaj chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
At first, I got a bunch of wierd mental images. And now I can't stop laughing XD
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Wow, great work on this. Short and unique. Love the image it brings to mind :)
Thanks for uploading!
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
There's something nice about this haiku
It makes me think of summer and it's boring, uneventful days
| nickyO chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
| Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Humorous. It's comical, but refreshingly creative!
| Alien Emerald chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
This has to be one of my alltime favorite haiku's... I could picture the scene from the very first line.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
11 words and 31 reviews.
This is really stunning.
| CCPerson chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
xD It's hilarious, in my opinion XD
| ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
jesus christ, utilised like this, haiku is a bloody art form and no mistake.
why haven't you written since May? good god.
| Anesther chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Depressing and very original.
Wonderful haiku. ;)
| PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
It was really different. I liked it!
| Written chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
| FromMyBackyard chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
asphalt is lovely to lay upon...the rough texture, the warmth from the heating of the sun.
i'd want to evaporate too, though, just to enjoy the sensation.
| Kaleidoscope23 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
I love this. Excellent word choice, they fit so nice together. It's short but powerful.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
awesome word choice and the imagery of her evaporating is amazing