|Reviews for At A Loss For Words: Betrayal|
| TheSkyIsGreen chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
Oh... the angsty-ness... it burns...
Who the heck is this about anyways? *curious eyes*
It was a good poem. Some of the wording was a little awkward, but... it was a good poem. Kudos.
| KabobGirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
That was SO cool!
Anyways, to get more reviewers, you should change your summary...this idea has LOTS of potential...all you need to do is incorporate a cliche love story...you don't have to make it too mushy...but that's what people generally like... Reread the mushy parts of Green's story just to get an idea.
-You know who I am, anyways (I changed by username until further notice because of our you-know-who...kind of embarrassing to know he might look at our stories...)