|Reviews for too much autumn intensified|
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
used to write like this, got very few reviews :( but it is nice. and i love the last "line" idea-ish thing
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Excellent format and use of repetition to enhance the speed. I like how this seems stream of consciousness with a purpose. An emotional outcry that grips the reader. Great write. MD:77.