i love the imagery in this poem, especially the line "honey-limbed and casually lethal." so beautiful!

Very nice poem! I love the imagery and the style.

Lovely and raw. Wild and beautiful. I envy your descriptions...you say so much with so little.

*faves*

I just love how the vocabulary you use adds to the depth of the emotions. It's a little confusing and more then a little amazing. I like this, and everything else you write. :) Take care.

This is just perfect. Going on my favorites for making everything just work. Your images are always SO vivid and that's what I just adore about your writing. The first stanza of this . . . I don't even know what to say, it's so amazing. Incredible. You're definitely one of my favorite authors here. Keep writing! :)

konban wa

As always an excellent accomplishment. :) I particularly loved the first stanza: "my lioness... casually lethal... and ate deserted hearts..." :D Beautiful descriptions.

Zaijen

-Shan-

I love the descriptions of "honey-limbed,""casually lethal," and "communist-curved." Beautifully written!