Reviews for Invisble
Next Exit chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
I don't know what's going on in this poem. Aside from a lack of focus, I don't feel any rhythym- it's more like prose rather than a poem.
kelby-lake chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Don't get 'their' and 'they're' confused!

This just looks like a load of random, 'whatever popped into your head' writing- and your head seems very cliched.

I'm very critical so don't take it personally.