Reviews for Make One Move
whatsmynameagain chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
this poem is very true

i love the way you have used repetition to show the steps involed in playing hard to get.

fantastic piece keep on writing!
Chalk chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
hahaha...this ia really good version of wats its like to asking someone out who really doesn't like u that much...

u r right, patience IS a virtue...and i like the way you used the line 'make one way'...repetition gives it meaning and makes the script stronger...

good going...