Reviews for Short Loan
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
wonderfully intense and succinct short story. bravo.
Disney Is Hardcore chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I want to say 'sweet', but that's not quite the right word...


That's so sweet! :)
Pink Bead Girl chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
"...tensed nipples seemed to cut through cloth..."

"...his kisses are the end of the known world..."

"...I stumble half a flight backwards, too busy kissing him to walk properly..."

"...breathing so franctic it melts my mind..."

ye Gods, the images you weave,

intense, concise, crisp, perfect.

thankyou very much.
Emerald Dragon77 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I think I have a thing for library romances. i think it's a mixture of my favorite things. Reading and boylove.
EpicInTheLibrary chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
You have epic writing skills. ;-; Seriously, the constant metaphors, and the way everything flows perfectly, and you describe things really well. Really, I'm like, spazzing out here. xD

Super epic win! ;-;
miss-life chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I have to make this quick because I'm a bit late. And no I didn't stay up until one in the morning to read Tehnicoloured something, so now my morning is all messed up. Nope. I didn't :D

Very cute and hot. I completely udnerstand the akward silence, I usually fill it with rambling that is not much better :P

Have a great day,

mintyfish chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Alf withdrawal, read this. Ohoho. The hilarity of connecting the frustration of relationships with the frustration of bloody short loan is genius. Abso-effing-lutely brilliant. Only thing *I* ever got from Short Loan was misery and a £15 fine. Grumble grumble. Anyway thanks, now I can have a bit of a chuckle to myself next time I'm toiling away in the Deweys. :)
mer chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i love the passion that your longer stories have. but here, in the space of so few words, you've created the same effect. it's as wonderfully subtle but strong. i love it. i love your people - their actions, their thoughts, their quiet humor, their passion. sometimes when i read your stories, i wonder if there is anything else worth writing about.
Tinyyellowboxes chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
sgwx chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Loved it! :D
Kjersti chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Heh. Cute little story. I loved it. :)
gumdropspimp chapter 1 . 2/23/2009
frogs of war chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
This is lovely. I came feel his need and urgency.
Anon chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Ah! lovely
YellowFlamingo25 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Haha, this is very cute.
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