Reviews for Short Loan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wonderfully intense and succinct short story. bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to say 'sweet', but that's not quite the right word... W/e. That's so sweet! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "...tensed nipples seemed to cut through cloth..." "...his kisses are the end of the known world..." "...I stumble half a flight backwards, too busy kissing him to walk properly..." "...breathing so franctic it melts my mind..." ye Gods, the images you weave, intense, concise, crisp, perfect. thankyou very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I have a thing for library romances. i think it's a mixture of my favorite things. Reading and boylove. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have epic writing skills. ;-; Seriously, the constant metaphors, and the way everything flows perfectly, and you describe things really well. Really, I'm like, spazzing out here. xD Super epic win! ;-; |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to make this quick because I'm a bit late. And no I didn't stay up until one in the morning to read Tehnicoloured something, so now my morning is all messed up. Nope. I didn't :D Very cute and hot. I completely udnerstand the akward silence, I usually fill it with rambling that is not much better :P Have a great day, Tina |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alf withdrawal, read this. Ohoho. The hilarity of connecting the frustration of relationships with the frustration of bloody short loan is genius. Abso-effing-lutely brilliant. Only thing *I* ever got from Short Loan was misery and a £15 fine. Grumble grumble. Anyway thanks, now I can have a bit of a chuckle to myself next time I'm toiling away in the Deweys. :) |
![]() ![]() i love the passion that your longer stories have. but here, in the space of so few words, you've created the same effect. it's as wonderfully subtle but strong. i love it. i love your people - their actions, their thoughts, their quiet humor, their passion. sometimes when i read your stories, i wonder if there is anything else worth writing about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() EVERYTHING YOU DO IS AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! :D |
![]() ![]() Heh. Cute little story. I loved it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SO CUTE :D Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is lovely. I came feel his need and urgency. |
![]() ![]() Ah! lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, this is very cute. |