Reviews for Young Love
The Lady dreams Imagine chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Ha ha! How true ;-). I love this! The concept is beautiful, and you have a good sense of the rhyme and rhythm of a poem. That being said, I don't like your main rhyme scheme. You do a good job with what you have, but instead of going aabcc, I would have gone aabcb. I kept hearing what the next line should be in my head, and the way it is, with the aabcc, doesn't conclude. It just snowballs faster and faster, and then, you're at the end, and it doesn't stop.

Your imagery and diction are exceptional, and I hope you put out more poetry!

Lady LN