Reviews for False
thisaccountisdeleted chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Beautiful extended metaphor.

I lovelovelove this.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
this works on so many levels while still being brilliant and speaking volumes on it's face value. excellent haiku. very well done.
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
cool. wonderful jon on this, i really like it! _
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Interestingly vivid and mysterious. Very thought provoking. Excellent haiku. MD:77.
Imaginary Strangers chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Oh, I loved this. The imagery you were able to create with so few words was wonderful! Since it was so short I don't feel so bad to say that my favorite lines were all of it. Haha. Wonderful job.
Doxology chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
wow. there's a lot of hidden truths in this. I like.

Peace and Love

h.p. warble
Raiyune chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
I love how you can manage to fit all that into a haiku because I find it difficult to really say anything in 5, then 7, then 5 syllables... Heh. It reminds me of the saying.. that writers portray the truth by telling lies... or something like that... Hm.