|Reviews for like the new great depression|
| padfoot.love chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
i know a boy like this
this is beautiful
| relapse into change chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
god, this is so beautiful
"And at 5 am I’m tasting the truth at the corners of his mouth & realizing that I’m just a little more breakable"
| this is britt chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
And at 5 am I’m tasting the truth at the corners of his mouth & realizing that I’m just a little more breakable.
pungent line to create a close. great- worded so well. the second stanza is superior, but it's still a good work.
| Imaginary Strangers chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
The third/second to last lines were really amazing. I liked the feeling of this poem, it was kind of emotional, like you were trying to keep it all in but it was still spilling out the edges [if that makes any sense whatsoever]. Great job.