Very intriguing read. At first, it really bothered me how easily everyone was taking the overthrow and the missing relatives. It seemed like everything was going too smoothly for the aliens. But I realize also that this is a draft and will be rewritten so perhaps the next write will have a bit more realism. I'm certainly not letting the details mess up a good story.

Keep up the good work! Thank you!

uh oh, i see competition setting in. i wonder what would have went down if Dax had been the one to catch them.

Oh you're back. You had me laughing quite a bit with the scene btwn Dax and Sati. Maybe if he's lucky she'll teach him some more lol.

Finally all caught up! The story is just getting better and better. _ I am very much looking forward to the next chapter!

Hm I like Dax alot but I'm liking Sas too. Sigh. Well if Sas can't have Sati's attention can someone else in that mansion garners Sas's affections? I don't want to see him sad.

Why is everyone giving Row such a hard time about Sati? And why was Frost in some ways instigating it? He's goes from cool behaviour to puzzling behaviour very fast. Is he bi-polar? He's very confusing.

That was too cute. I'm loving and feeling for Sas. Sati's getting quite the attention.

tsk tsk see what drinking does to you? lol. I was wondering if Sati would ever considering getting her tubes untied and try to have another kid at some point? It seems she's still gaga over babies.

What is going thru Dax and Sas's minds?

What's going on. Didn't expect that chpt at all.

Frost is confusing me. I was getting so used to him being a butthole and now he goes and shows me a sense of humor. I don't know what to make of him.

Hm that last conversation was very suspicious. Who could they be?

Ohh a new friend. The more I read the more I realize I have some serious re-reading to do, especially about Frost. He's acting funny..hm.

WOW I had a list of questions but you distraced me when I saw the word cheesecake...m. Ok my questions which I know I'll have to wait to get the answers to but I'll present them anyway. What's up Frost's butt concering Sati and in general? What's this project? What's his relationship with Taloh? And finally what's this about impregnantion?

wow alot has happened in so little time. Will Tony be allowed to stay at the mansion or will he be sent back eventually and continue to work as a laborer. I can't remember if you covered this but I understand that there is no family unit so how does Dax know that Row is his?