Reviews for Ballet Slippers
MissBumcheek chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
:O AWESOME CHAPTER! I'll keep on reading the next ones! :)



Katherine Queen chapter 8 . 2/2/2011
This is an unexpected ending to this book. It doesn't seem like this is over however. Regardless, I did enjoy this. I only wish Caelyn could have been with Wes who is the one inside the mask. Defintely a great fiction, but I didn't expect the fiction to have such an unpredictable ending. I did hope she would have wound up with Wes, regardless it is a beautiful fiction.
Katherine Queen chapter 4 . 2/2/2011
It looks like Caelyn embraces her true self. However, her going to the dance in a mask will sure be worth to see in this fiction. Wes will also have a mask on. Who knows? The two might actually fall in love.
Katherine Queen chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
This is a unique story. Sure the death of the parents isn't something that hasn't been done before. However, the character of Caelyn seems very life like. I hope she does more ballet soon.

Its a little early to see what Caelyn will do, however I do hope the ballet will soon give her a reason to celebrate her new life.
Dancing on Water chapter 8 . 1/14/2010
I really hope you continue this. I read stories like yours once in a blue moon because its so hard to find ones so well written and thought out. To not continue this, I feel, is a shame and a disjustice to the world. Your writing inspires me as a dancer. :)
queenhalloween chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
Wonderful! I read the whole thing just right now. I loved it. You have a knack for seeking the originality in the cliche. I'm not really into the magical meeting in the masquerade ball but I like how you put it. I don't know, you added humor to it. Sorry, did that make any sense? Haha. The first chapter was amazingly written, my favorite chapter. So sad... :]
Lehxra chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
Haha! I wonder if this boy becomes protagonist's love interest!
Lehxra chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
It plays good on the emotions. I felt really sad when her parents died.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
cant wait for more!
Mary Chrys chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
Okay. I don't know if I've reviewed on this before, but I read it a little while ago. Anyway, great story, good characters, good plot, liked the dance, please update! Like, seriously! Please?
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 6 . 5/31/2008
i love the story!

i hope you update soon!

i cant get enough!

stargazerlost chapter 6 . 5/20/2008
Oh, Wes left her a letter, how cute yet stalkerish is that! hahah I couldn't stop laughing when Wes was talking about the pens watching him change. Hm, Dave is a really cool character, he ranks right up there on my favorite characters with Keira. Poor Caelyn, I'd be freaked out too if someone left a letter in my secret place, but hahah now she's mad. I wonder how Wes will respond to her questions and I'm really curious as to who she bumped into. This story just keeps getting better and better. God job!
Maybreakmyheart chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
Good job! Keep up the good work :D
doodlebug19 chapter 5 . 4/27/2008
loves it so far! kinda wanna know more about wes, though
stargazerlost chapter 5 . 4/26/2008
hahaha Falling down and spilling breakfast all over yourself has to be so embarrassing. Caelyn really is not liking Wes at the moment, which makes their bickering all the more funny. Keira is becoming a really cool character, I hope we get to see even more of her. lol Your excitment about the next chapter has me dying with curiosity, but I'll just have to wait and see. Ooh prom and disneyland, sounds like you're going to have a lot of fun coming up.
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