Reviews for The View from the Fishbowl
Andrea Roycee chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
I like this one too, its subtle and its like where is this going and then it gets to the end and its like whoa. I also like how you dialogue its really good.
Let Them Eat Cake chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
O. Interesting. I enjoyed this a lot. I actually think that if you wanted to, you could continue this, but that's up to you. Just saying you could make a good story out of it. One little thing: her name changed from Jane to Jean, but I think that was just a little type-o. Great job! It was really enjoyable!

- Kay (Let Them Eat Cake)
Tasha Lee chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Great idea. You write really well, too. Grammar's in check, unlike most other stories. It'd be great if you wrote more on this. :D
poncypuck chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
I really enjoyed this. You did a great narration. The conflict of the paparazzo was especially interesting. The abrupt ending was a nice way to conclude the story, I think it worked well with the overall tone. Nice work!