|Reviews for The Clocks Were Asleep|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
That was really good. I loved the last two lines, I felt that it fit perfectly.
However "sumbered" in your first stanza irritates me slightly. It feels like you just put it there to make it sound fancy when "slept" would've been perfectly fine.
But that's just my writing.. you have exceptional talent and I know you know what you're doing.
Keep it up!
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
The detail in this poem was amazing, your verses were alive and breathing with detail, and I really loved the first few lines. Sorry that it's taken me so long to review this, I totally told your to post soon and then it takes me a month to get over here. I really enjoyed this though, it was wonderful, slightly abstract but wonderfully memorable. Keep up the good work.