|Reviews for disappearing stars|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
loneliness always feels like a fileting rip to me.
| review chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
yeah this is really sad.
i like the "& i could feel (almost)" part.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I like this a lot... the title is great and I like the line about the invisible barrier and the part in quotes.. great piece
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
it's like a sad photograph.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Aw, that was so sad. But I thought that, again, it was well written. Good work. )
| The Postscript chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Nice! There were many little components of the poem that I just adored. For one, the use of the word "tug". It is such an acurate word for this piece! Good job with diction in other places as well. I also really love the lines "i'll be following/the rise and fall of our feelings/to the very end". Really great write that tugs on my own heart as well. Keep writing, k.
| marinawings chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
wow. chills. this one definitely gave me chills. there's a pleasant, haunting cadence to it that lends atmosphere. i can definitely feel the emotions this poem conveys. good work!