Reviews for The Fledgeling
lady blade13 chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
this story is amazing
chicaanime chapter 4 . 9/14/2009
that was really interesting.
MidnightThief15 chapter 4 . 2/26/2008
MidnightThief15 chapter 3 . 2/26/2008
lol. So true. XD
urbanfictionalist chapter 4 . 2/26/2008
hmm the chapter was short but i liked it. It seems little Lia knows how to act very well. Micah shouldnt worry that much i mean she is stronger than the average human. But i enjoyed it and i cant wait for the next
Lady of Confusion chapter 4 . 2/23/2008
Phoebesmom chapter 4 . 2/22/2008
I really like this story. I cant wait to see where it ends at :oD I'm sure it'll be a great story.
Faith Adeline chapter 4 . 2/21/2008
good chapter. I enjoyed it. Keep it up and update soon.

atreyu love chapter 4 . 2/21/2008
its good, but dont you think she gave up

her previous life too easily?

she doesnt even ask about her parents.

Rebecca M. Davis chapter 4 . 2/21/2008
I like this story! Very good! You have a good sense of flow, not to fast, and not too slow. One thing I might suggest is that you might want to add more detail. There is no rush at all. I know you feel like you just want to get it all out and get it out now! probably, but remember that you don't want to give the reader instant gratification. String them along a bit so that they are always left wondering. lol. Anyway, GREAT JOB! Keep up the good work! And I really can't wait for an update! UPDATE ASAP!
NightmareWriter chapter 3 . 1/14/2008
Yes, he's going to be the perfect heartless master vampire. -please note sarcasm-. They're going to be lovers soon, I think so.
urbanfictionalist chapter 3 . 1/2/2008
aw isnt that sweet. loved the chapter cant wait for the next
Faith Adeline chapter 3 . 1/2/2008
Very good, I liked the chapter. I laughed when he called her a minx haha. Keep up the wonderful work!

sousie chapter 3 . 1/2/2008
Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
Good job, although the chapter is far too short lol. Keep it up, and update soon.

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