Reviews for If Only
i'd delete this if possible chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Oh, amen. I've been here before and it -aches-.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
great poem,I really enjoyed it.

Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Sweet, its short but it would keep anyone reading, great rhymes used, every word was thought over before hand, great work, keep writing!

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Nice poem.

~Twilight Starr~
life like whoa chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
This is really good, I want to say the same thing to someone but I doubt it will work. I'll be adding this to my favs and my C2. Great job!

Kristie Marie
ContemplativeJoyce chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Good job.. I really liked it. :]

And it relates to most people.
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Good job with this. I liked the last stanza, how you broke your format and italicized the last line. Both worked well for this poem. Keep up the good work!