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Sadmaking! Wellz, goodluck!

And good chappie - though a tad boring

:) I like it!

aww

derek's a retard TT"

how many months pregnant is she now ?

please update son !

aww bless em :( please update soon

very nice! that kevin character is really starting to get on my nerves. good chapter!

Hurry up and update!

I love it and I want to see what the hell happens! WOOT!

i luv it!

bringin derek back in was a good idea!

i hope that rine stays safe!

ttyl

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And thus I clothe my naked villainy

with odd old ends stol'n forth of Holy Writ,

And seem a saint when most i play the devil.

I can't wait until rine tells Kevin that she had a surprise visitor! But anyways great 't wait for the next one!

bravo! you have almsot a perfect setup for a disaster later in the story! ~if you want it of course~ what will derek end up doing? is she going to be able to keep the baby? so many questions! LOL, well anyways, good chapter.

great chapter as always :) update soon

omg! that is baad... please update soon

I have a question: If Rine was three months pregnant when she and Kevin broke up, and it was six months later, shouldn't she have had her child by now?

Dereks back!...OOH SCANDALOUS! I love this story and its so good to not be cliche I mean sure its probably been done before but not as eloquently as this! wel toodle loo!

sinerely,

Anna M

I sware that i had to re-read the part of the story where Derek comes in just to make sure that I was just seeing something. But i wasn't. Stupid Derek. Well anyways that was a wonderful chapter obviously ignoring the fact that Derek was in it. Well ttfn! (ta ta for now)!