Reviews for f*cked-
TKsDragonfly chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
i dont think the mood of the poem and the rhyme scheme matched up too well. this poem seems to have a deep message, but somewhat sing songy rhyme scheme that seemed to dominate the poem likely detracting from the effectiveness of the message. i think if you put a little more thought into it this could be a truly stunning peice of work.
RyanDrake chapter 1 . 11/18/2001
I like your truth, adore your style, and wouldn't dream of a better ending, unless it's all still going? Really wonderful piece, as I was assured but your reference, Erika Lynn.
La Contessa de Machina chapter 1 . 5/10/2001
hey suz. i guess this is what you'd call a "cara poem" like the one you showed me yesterday. hehe. but seriously i like this one very much. "and no one will take yours, so have fun with your whores"
Annabel Lee chapter 1 . 4/14/2001
I love this!
jane chapter 1 . 4/2/2001
That's really good. keep writing.