Reviews for She's Not Safe
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I really enjoyed reading this. I love the last four lines- there's something captivating about them. Keep up the great work!
Kicking Poe chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
the last two lines are so charmingly odd, so absolutely right that they seem to sum up everything in life - unexplainable but brilliant just the same. I have no idea if that makes sense, the lines are just incredibly striking to me. honest and clever. cheers.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
this is great, there is tension and heightened emotion from the first line. again, this is a perfectly captured snapshot and it exudes individualism. the last two lines made me chuckle. this is a fab poem, nice work.