|Reviews for Skirting the Surface|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
My thoughts are older
than a flock
of black birds.
-that is brilliant.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
there is such an overwhelming sadness in every line and painted image in this poem. the metaphor is carried perfectly through to the end and the whole effect is gorgeous yet melancholy.
"I scream across the sand dunes of my own irrelevance." absolutely amazing lines!