|Reviews for angel|
| Mienaku chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
I love the melancholy tone of disbelief to this one.
How you know all these things are true, and yet you can't make yourself seem to believe them.
"because I would hate for them to kneel,
to pray for me,"
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
That is so tragic. Great job!
| Asphodelus chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
I love the imagery and the whole theme of it.
You have wonderful rhthym in your writing.
| ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
nice. the parenthesis in
"and when it occurs,
that vile s(k)in,"
is a nice effect.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
I kinda like this. It's nice. I think the analogy is pretty but again I think you use too many commas...Nonetheless, good work.