Reviews for teach me
thedarksideoflovingme chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
I'm too lazy to log in. I really like this. Although, yes I am an annoying person, Existance doesn't have an A it is Existence and Existant is Existent. Yeah, I said I was annoying, did I forget anal? lol But seriously, I do like this it reminds me of things that go through my own mind once (I lie it's alot) in a while.

how to not be a victim
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Sometimes we just don't feel normal. I really don't believe in "normal". Great poem. Good luck with poetry and life.

Twilight Starr
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
haha, but isn't it so completely normal to be insane?

I kinda like this description. It was nice. The poem appeared to be well written but I think that some of the commas that were used were unnecessary. I think you could have said the same thing without them.

Good work. )