Reviews for The Staircase
Mirutsa Ilayin chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Very nihilistic; I liked it. As with most of your work, I feel like you should really do a little more with some of your narrative. At the same time, the conciseness makes them easy to read. Thanks for the story; keep writing!
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
oh no the ending was like a punch in the face, which is actually a good thing even though my face is in pain. :)
gangrene chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
Good beginning, very good, good middle, but the ending was somewhat disappointing. Maybe add more detail? "With a hoarse cry of shock, the old man dropped to the floor, dead." Something like that. :P

You know, I've never seen this concept before. It's awesome. :D
Christy Leigh Stewart chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
Geez, lol poor guy...Not an uplifting story is it? I liked it for that reason