Reviews for Looking For Love In All The Wrong Places
foxyricanlady chapter 20 . 2/17/2011
great chapter i really enjoyed it and i just love jay
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 20 . 2/17/2011
Late update!

Dont worry i havent forgotten this story!

I loved the chapter!

Please update SOONER rather than later :)
dharleiin28 chapter 19 . 12/31/2010
i like this story!:)

anywei.. so what happens next?

will leira's father know that their relationship before was just fake and he would hate age? or will the brothers know it first?

i'm thrilled!

update soon please?
WynterLight chapter 19 . 12/3/2010
I enjoyed this chapter and how things turned out, but have a few suggestions. Given Leira's self-consciousness and self doubt, I would have liked to see more out of Age to reassure her how he feels - feeling that he is aroused doesn't seem like it would convince her on the emotional level that he just doesn't want sex, but cares for her more. Especially given how in earlier chapters you've shown us his concerned, caring side. I felt like that could have been a strong, scary, raw, tender moment of facing feelings and realizing that someone liked you as you are, instead of a somewhat crass "feel my hard dick, that's how much I want to be with you", if that makes sense.

Also - I feel like I missed something with the whole paper bag she brought - I assume you're coming back to that in the next chapter?

I am really enjoying the story and can't wait to read more!
ChemicalHazzard chapter 19 . 11/27/2010
Whoop Whoop

that was one good chapter right there

I cannot wait until the next one.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 19 . 11/24/2010
Lurvve this story :)

Very hawt chapter!

Please update soon!
belle1220 chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
And the sex returns. YES! I'm so glad you didn't break this into two chapters. I might literally have died. LOL

Glad we're finally moving forward in the relationship. RE her mother - my feeling is the parents are dating. ;)
Anya the Lascivious chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
Update soon!

Megan chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
Hell yea! I love this chapter. I'm so glad they are officially together now. Also, the steamy sex scene was great.
chewychester chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
My, what a big chapter you have there!
foxyricanlady chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
I loved this chapter I'm glad that they became a real couple hope you update soonvcant wait to read what's gonna happen next
Xxluvbugger213xX chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
Great Chapter! Love the ending lol, makes me feel like a bit of a smut though with my parents downstairs haha. I love Jay by the way. He ALWAYS knows the right thing to say! I mean I noticed it in the beginning, but Jay has an amazing way with words!

Anyhoo. Keep it going! ( :

Oh Happy Thanksgiving!
happyeverafter chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
I'm very happy that I found this story. The plot is not new, however all the people are original. They all seems very real, and you manage to tell the story in a very interesting way. Thank you for sharing!
I Will Not Die I Will Survive chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
thank the lord... all the sexual tension is now out the way :D finally they are together XD this makes me so happy, i cant wait for the next chapter update soon! :P
Liana McNaughtn chapter 19 . 11/22/2010
LOVE IT! I can't wait for the nexr chapter!
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