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Reviews for
Veterans pride
loversdream17
chapter 1 .
11/20/2007
GREAT JOB! I really liked how you kept the flow and rythm going. GREat piece.
Mandi~4~life
Lavender Quill
chapter 1 .
11/14/2007
This was very well written! I really liked the last 6 lines. Good job!