Beautiful and inspiring.

wow, great work, love the rhymes thrown in at all sorts of places, gives it a bumpy feeling (sorry for a lack of a better term). Love the gradual metamorphosis from the doormat to the goddess, and then linking it all back to the quote at the end.

I love this - you have a great way of using rhymes, thrown haphazardly into your poem. It sounds a little like slam. The last line was great, a very confident final thought and tying back to the quote at the beginning.