Reviews for Pablo Picasso said
crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Beautiful and inspiring.
S. Ben Beach chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
wow, great work, love the rhymes thrown in at all sorts of places, gives it a bumpy feeling (sorry for a lack of a better term). Love the gradual metamorphosis from the doormat to the goddess, and then linking it all back to the quote at the end.
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
I love this - you have a great way of using rhymes, thrown haphazardly into your poem. It sounds a little like slam. The last line was great, a very confident final thought and tying back to the quote at the beginning.