Reviews for Credible
Nemonus chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
Good. "I've sabotaged my joy" and "Tell me a lie more credible/so that I can believe you/persuade me that/I'm in love with you." are clever. "only the rain could wash my way" doesn't make much sense. Enjoyable piece, though.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
i like this a lot. the concept describes a way i have felt for a long time. too many people "fall in love" with me it seems, so there really is no validity in the statement. its all lies. but im not sure if there ever has to be anything more. haha anyways, nice work
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
I kinda like this. It's pretty. I like the lines:

"You're my killer chocolate

it's sweet on your inside

can I eat the residues of this till

I lick the wrapper to save something?"

I thought that was unique. Good work. Keep writing. )