Reviews for Broken
Lord Noctis chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Wow, this has a good sense of elogance, and it flows very nicely. It also did a good job evoking emotion out of me. I liked it very much.
crazyrandomgirl888 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
aww so sad but its true once your rejected its hard to feel yourself again or half yourself again.
TheDJ chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
This is a beautiful poem - but you should never feel as though you need to make a fake smile to pretend you're ok. I loved the metaphor of (this hearbroken love ballad, that i'm now singing, mellowing melody;, constantantly, inside my head, thinking about you)

It was a beautiful poem, as always