Reviews for Stagnation
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
there is something about lavender that is both alluring and depressing.

it is a pretty name.
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
beautifully put. i love the choice of image and the idea of 'icicle thin yesterdays' - just gorgeous.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I like how you've brought color and concreteness (is that a word?) to an abstract idea such as yesterdays. Very intriguing. And once again, you've used purple! Or a shade of it, at least. Keep writing! :)
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I like the way this flows, in that it doesn't flow naturally but works all the same. Great haiku.

Peace, Daze
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
Wow, this is really good. The best haiku I've read for quite a long time, surely. Excellent. Write on.

Anna _