Reviews for Blanket
felicia13 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
I like how there's paralellism between this and 'Mosquito.' Not really in terms of the words themselves, but mostly in the style. It's another soft poem (appropriate for one entitled 'Blanket') and I just like how it goes through sort of softly and wraps itself around you and only chokes you a little bit.

The last stanza is my particular favorite.


Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
the struggle for sleep bit was repeated a too much and could have been more creative. the poem's concept will strengthen with a little revision on those few lines. it's well depicted and there's some good use of language and the poem works equally well when taken literally or metaphorically. i really liked the second stanza.