Okay, so as I was reading there were quite a few lines that caught me for a moment, and I was going to quote them... until I got to the end and realized that I'd have to quote the entire thing. This explains, all too well, how I feel these days. Amazing.

"This is not my fault."

I hope I can find the courage to say that someday.

Cassandra

I really liked this. It was very well delivered in the sense that I could feel the words. Very powerful, very emotional.

And I just have to say...I love the song Apologize. My friend plays it on the piano and it's simply amazing.

Very nicely done. You have a lot of talent.

Powerful. Very emotional piece. Well done. Always be positive and write on.

~Anna~ _

i love this part: "and when you're basking in my glory,/ I'll tell you all the things I was always too scared to admit, / and you know what I hope happens? / I hope you feel like shit."

i partially laughed, because it was so well delivered. good job!

wow...this is really powerful. not very poetic, but very powerful.

makes me wish I could hug you to make you feel better or something