Reviews for maybe it won't hurt so bad
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
gr [ that boy

i like the first stanza best in this one too haha i like the imagery
mezzie chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
so much conflict

- mezzie
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
Aw this is sad, btu I sdtill like it. I would advise though that it can get confusing for readers to have to try and decifier what you are trying to say in your ru -together sentences. butstillgoodjob,istiloveyourwork!
Joah Yens chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
this is very sad and good! Just a critique instead of havingallyour words bunched how .? It would be easier to read. Good poem. )