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Let's See If It Moves chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
This is a great poem, about learning how your imperfections are who you are, and about eventually accepting them. Amazing job!

Baaaaaaaa,
Ewe.
Liam02 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
the first two lines in this poem are friggin genius.

I mean it.

They're harsh, a real attention getter-

but they're perfectly executed.