Reviews for ticking, ticking, ticking
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
I totaly agree ith this piece. Some of the words seem a bit off to me but it still a fairly good piece, keep up the good use of imagery. xox, lol.
phantom66 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
wow! really liked it!

keep up the auwsome work!
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
I enjoyed reading this. Stanza three was my favorite. Keep up the good work!
xfail chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
This doesn't have much of a rhythm, but perhaps you intend for it to be that way; it doesn't matter. You have created some very beautiful images with this poem, and the reader has to look a bit deeper to get the whole meaning, which is always good. I really love the third stanza.