Reviews for To a Friend chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
haha, aw, sweet ending. clever rhyming, although it was inconsistent at a few parts... mm, this phrase, "to force your knife to your own hand?" seems kind of awkward, maybe it could been better worded as "to force a knife through your hand?".. but alas, that's just my opinion :P ..And "and when we're done we'll be young yet old." seemed out of place compared to the rest of the context but I suppose if you change or didn't put either of the prhases, the rhyme of the poem would have been ruined, yes? anyhoo, besides that, it seemed like a really sincere poem. descriptive beginning and cute ending. Nice friend you are- best of luck to both of you. hope all goes well for her. Great job on the piece.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
Aww bittersweet poem. Well done. Always be there for friends and write on! :)

~Anna~ _