|Reviews for Things|
| casi chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
i wish i knew how to help.. but lately i feel so far away from you and everyone else... we NEED to get together some time soon... i need a good "honesty" session... and i think one might help you too...
love ya to pieces
| That One Kid From The US chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
I think this was a poem on fictionpress meant for another person, but I thought it was well written, so I decided to review it.
It's like a torrent of emotion that begins suddenly and blasts all other thoughts out of the mind of the person reading it, and then stops as suddenly as it starts. It was a very fiery poem, and though only 5 lines long carries the depth of much longer poems.
I would like to have given you some criticism to help you become a better poet, but I can't find anything to improve in it. Short, simple, and to the point. It's really good.
| sweets555 chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
i think i know what you mean with this one.
and i love the formatting.
if you need to vent, u know how to get to me.
((and goodluck getting this other person to understand))