Reviews for A Lesson From Cinderella
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Thanks for participating in the Review Marathon! Sorry the review is so late... stupid fp being down

I liked the piece. It was cute and you tied in the references to storybooks well.

I'm interested in why the lesson from Cinderella when so many other fairy tales have the same beginning and end. I wonder if there's a specific reason you picked her?

The rhyming was ok. Not great, but not forced either. But the rhythm seemed off to me. When I read it out loud I expected it to be more like sing songy if that makes sense just because of what it was describing...
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Haha, I love this! The rhymes are very natural and the rhythm gives it a sing-song fairy-tale quality. I don't really know where the connection between this and Cinderella lies, but this is a good poem nonetheless xD
Jeannie-Redd chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Cute poem. I like the humor.

Jeannie-Redd
Erisah Mae chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
cute. This has a nice rhythm to it, and I found it mildly amusing.

Nice.

Erisah