Reviews for The Window
lianoid chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I love the repetition of “It’s watching me” because it imbues the piece with a really creepy vibe throughout. The fourth stanza, especially, was really great. The imagery was particularly vivid there, and really drove home that creepiness.

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Burnt Bread chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
Don't put yourself down! I just got around to reading your works and on the contrary, you are quite good at poems. You really bring the attic window to life with the way you relate it to how it makes you feel. The cyclops eye, the feeling of sentient weeds pulling people under, the neon sign... they all evoke great imagery.

The ending is perfect.