|Reviews for I Dream Of you|
| Squidy chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Ah, the title is perfect. I have no idea why, either, considering your poem talks about so many other things. It's just good.
And the poem itself basically just mapped out how my train of thought works...it's really good, although I don't think "The cycle continues" at the end is neccessary. You got the message through with the last stanza clearly enough, so you don't really need it.
I like the use of bold and italics as well.