Reviews for Winter Storms
Matt Le Bleu chapter 19 . 2/15
What a shame this has been discontinued for so long. I would have liked to see what happened, especially since all the characters are so vibrant and distinct despite having so many of them.

Your writing style is very fluid and your dialogue is strong. Sometimes you could probably brush up on continuity - for example Rayne's first chapters have a lot to do with 'following the script' and acting. But you dropped that language and the hints towards his out of school past times quite quickly after he starts talking to Aedan. Other than than, largely well-written with few typos and errors.

Anyway, I hope you've continued to write and wish you every success.

Matt le Bleu.
TunglMed chapter 19 . 2/13
WOAH, six years on and still no next chapter with a bit more Aedan-Rayne info?! That's just ridiculous.
I know there's probably no hope now, but this does make me terribly sad :(

I actually read this a while ago and recently thought "Wait, what was that amazing fic I read that I couldn't stop telling everyone about?" And couldn't believe that I hadn't faved or even reviewed (which meant it took me a good while of mean detective work to finally find it again).

So here, finally, is my review. I don't know if this amazing author is still on fp but if you are: You Are Amazing!
I loved this story so much, it beats every other story that I've ever loved so much (I think). Rayne is so unbelievable naïve but you make it work so well. I love how you make everything part of a script at the beginning and how everyone talks over Rayne and he has no clue.

[Sorry for the hideously long review!] xxxx Med
Guest chapter 19 . 9/16/2013
But... what happened to the update you mentioned? :(

Such a great fic, one of my favourites ;) I love Rayne, he is so cute and innocent and I love how you put everything in his perspective. He's adorable!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVV VVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Aiden and Rayne-KKKAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAaIiIIIIiIIIII IIIIIIIIIIii
Cattness chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
I cant help but already be in love
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
hotness at the end. I want to be popular unpopular
Guest chapter 19 . 8/11/2013
Oh my god I've become completely obsessed. The smirks and the characters and threats and...O0O I'm blowing up in amusement and respect. I guess it'd be adorable if keane loved Sable. I mean come on the dude's fucking awesome. Love ya for making him
Guest chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
You satisfied me. My hunger of awesomeness has been fulfilled with Sable. Where do you come up with those great comebacks
Guest chapter 17 . 8/11/2013
Love it! SJ rocks
ladyfortune chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Just finished chapter 1 and I'm hooked. Thanks for writing this :)
firefox vixen chapter 19 . 11/18/2012
awesome!
whisperypath chapter 19 . 9/29/2012
it's been 4 years since the last update...and as unlikely as it is that you'll continue...please if you have the time or interest...please continue D:
Really really reaaaaally love this story
FilleInsomniaque229 chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
MWAHAHAHAHAHA! Okay, so hot guy isn't used to this skinny kid who covers bruised walking away from him, and sadi skinny pile of bones isn't used to anyone caring. Okay. I LOVE IT so far! I looked, and saw that it hasn't been updated since 2008! Fuck The What, Man! .WHAT.
Anais Goldfish chapter 19 . 6/2/2012
It seems as though you haven't updated in a while, but I'll put my faith in you regardless and Alert your story. It's fucking brilliant, you do realize that don't you? I just want to ravish all the characters in this lovely little story you have set out for us :D
TheMusicIsEnough chapter 19 . 6/1/2012
OH MY GOSH I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! :D You are so amazing at writing! Rayne is so sweet and I just love Aedan. I'm so intrigued to know what's up with Keane!

You're writing style is amazing, you've written this absolutely beautifully! Please update soon! :D
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