|Reviews for Winter Storms|
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/7
Just read all the chapters and it's actually a really great story with relatable characters. I would suggest more thoroughly proof reading though. Besides the grammatical errors you find scattered through the story, it seems as if you sometimes miss adding entire words. I can't wait to read the next chapter though, let the angst begin
| Impractical Practicality chapter 19 . 7/12
(This is referring to who Keane likes)
| Impractical Practicality chapter 14 . 7/12
Don't you dare run away, Rayne.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
Spade-sama! Why have you not updated in... 7 years?! You disappeared around then and we all miss you! Please update soon! Also, could I make this into a bl? I love you!
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/30/2014
I think Kaene is in love with Sable, but not sure really. Please write more chapters because I absolutely LOVE his story and it's one of the best ones I've read in a while! Thanks so much! U r the best!
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/30/2014
::blows kiss back:: u r awesome, and not trying to spun creepy or anything, but I love this story so far! Thx for writing it!
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/30/2014
Totally Tom man
| Matt Le Bleu chapter 19 . 2/15/2014
What a shame this has been discontinued for so long. I would have liked to see what happened, especially since all the characters are so vibrant and distinct despite having so many of them.
Your writing style is very fluid and your dialogue is strong. Sometimes you could probably brush up on continuity - for example Rayne's first chapters have a lot to do with 'following the script' and acting. But you dropped that language and the hints towards his out of school past times quite quickly after he starts talking to Aedan. Other than than, largely well-written with few typos and errors.
Anyway, I hope you've continued to write and wish you every success.
Matt le Bleu.
| TunglMed chapter 19 . 2/13/2014
WOAH, six years on and still no next chapter with a bit more Aedan-Rayne info?! That's just ridiculous.
I know there's probably no hope now, but this does make me terribly sad :(
I actually read this a while ago and recently thought "Wait, what was that amazing fic I read that I couldn't stop telling everyone about?" And couldn't believe that I hadn't faved or even reviewed (which meant it took me a good while of mean detective work to finally find it again).
So here, finally, is my review. I don't know if this amazing author is still on fp but if you are: You Are Amazing!
I loved this story so much, it beats every other story that I've ever loved so much (I think). Rayne is so unbelievable naïve but you make it work so well. I love how you make everything part of a script at the beginning and how everyone talks over Rayne and he has no clue.
[Sorry for the hideously long review!] xxxx Med
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/16/2013
But... what happened to the update you mentioned? :(
Such a great fic, one of my favourites ;) I love Rayne, he is so cute and innocent and I love how you put everything in his perspective. He's adorable!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVV VVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Aiden and Rayne-KKKAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAaIiIIIIiIIIII IIIIIIIIIIii
| Cattness chapter 2 . 8/14/2013
I cant help but already be in love
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
hotness at the end. I want to be popular unpopular
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/11/2013
Oh my god I've become completely obsessed. The smirks and the characters and threats and...O0O I'm blowing up in amusement and respect. I guess it'd be adorable if keane loved Sable. I mean come on the dude's fucking awesome. Love ya for making him
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
You satisfied me. My hunger of awesomeness has been fulfilled with Sable. Where do you come up with those great comebacks