Reviews for melted wax and photographs never developed
nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
lovely.
Camelia Sinensis chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
i'm not sure if i understood it, probably not. but i loved it all the same.

despite all the angsty feeling i got from some words, it was actually funny. almost as if you were criticising others (and maybe yourself, too). it's brilliant.
Bellanyx chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
I really enjoy this particular poem. You're a very strong writer, and oddly enough I understand every single analogy or image you've used. It's very fun to read.

Parts of it remind me of the Holywood album by a certain musician, just the images you choose.

Very good job!

Coma