Reviews for Vicious Entanglement
LostinLov3 chapter 3 . 3/9/2008
oh shoots, she's getting suduced by her teacher... i hope he's hot, so she enjoys it, she better...lol.
atreyu love chapter 3 . 3/7/2008
haha. the teacher is pretty funny :P
Rebecca Knight chapter 3 . 3/6/2008
Please, continue this! It intrigues me, and I can't wait for the next chapter :-)
VisualKeiXx chapter 3 . 3/6/2008
Continue por favore!
StarEyed14 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Hey!

This is good so far, lol. I just wanted to leave a review for chapter one.

Off to chapter two,

StarEyed14
Valkyre chapter 2 . 2/2/2008
What?
sunybee chapter 2 . 1/15/2008
o. me like. update soon with the good stuff.
Vhengeance chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
first of all

is a perv U_U

but thats just me. xD

and there is some mis calculation. half way down the chapter, you write "religion class", but shouldnt it be english?

i just thought i should point that out.

and its interesting, tres maginifique! i was practically glued to the computer screen.

good job.

...and for some reason, i feel a connection to this Bianca character of yours
Dark Hime chapter 2 . 1/5/2008
aw i was hoping for more. I don't know what it is aboutstudent teacher stories that i like but there's something there and you definately have that spark in writing that i love Rebecca is a fun character keep it up.

Update soon
Lerene chapter 2 . 1/5/2008
OMG! Did he really just do that?

interesting story, can't wait to read more.
Lerene chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Detention at 6:30 in the morning? That's evil!
Vhengeance chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
i thought this was pretty good.

it caught my attention and i was imagining it as the story went on. also, i shifted in my seat a little ;]

i think its well on its way, but...

but you need to have more of a setting when Rebecca comes out of her fantasy novel, more of a description, like she's in class obviously, but that wasn't very clear.

all in all, i liked it

keep it up, i wanna know what happens xD
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