Reviews for Vicious Entanglement |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh shoots, she's getting suduced by her teacher... i hope he's hot, so she enjoys it, she better...lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. the teacher is pretty funny :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, continue this! It intrigues me, and I can't wait for the next chapter :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue por favore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! This is good so far, lol. I just wanted to leave a review for chapter one. Off to chapter two, StarEyed14 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() o. me like. update soon with the good stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() first of all is a perv U_U but thats just me. xD and there is some mis calculation. half way down the chapter, you write "religion class", but shouldnt it be english? i just thought i should point that out. and its interesting, tres maginifique! i was practically glued to the computer screen. good job. ...and for some reason, i feel a connection to this Bianca character of yours |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i was hoping for more. I don't know what it is aboutstudent teacher stories that i like but there's something there and you definately have that spark in writing that i love Rebecca is a fun character keep it up. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Did he really just do that? interesting story, can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Detention at 6:30 in the morning? That's evil! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought this was pretty good. it caught my attention and i was imagining it as the story went on. also, i shifted in my seat a little ;] i think its well on its way, but... but you need to have more of a setting when Rebecca comes out of her fantasy novel, more of a description, like she's in class obviously, but that wasn't very clear. all in all, i liked it keep it up, i wanna know what happens xD |