|Reviews for Little Girl|
| Jack Cackler chapter 1 . 12/3/2007
Rather pretty. I was pleasantly surprised by this one.
I was thankful that you didn't take to copy/pasting the chorus to fill up the song, however at the same time I feel like the chorus needn't be a repetition. Perhaps the man can be saying more to her? Revealing, in doing so, more of himself and gaining depth.
| Through Glass Eyes chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
thats really well down. It would make a wonderful song. (Not that i ever was going to but that made sure, I'm NEVER getting drunk)
| SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
The title goes so well with the verses, and I'm glad you posted this. It would make a really good song, if only I could hear a tune. But the lyrics are really powerful. Maybe you could have added another verse to finish the story off a bit more.
| HollowxPromises chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
O that's actually sent shivers down my verse.
The word "uh-oh" is residing in my mind...