|Reviews for blue as the sky|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I love this! So much emotion and I love the description. I love the bit about the eyes matching the color of the sky, that was so beautiful and wonderfully written.
I would love honest opinions/feedback from a writer like you! It would mean the world to me and I would appreciate it.
| Luny Loona chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
I like the emotions in this. However, considering you didn't punctuate the capitals, I'm assuming you want this to flow. Then I suggest not punctuating, or at least not putting in full stops or other sentence-stopping marks. And also, you put the past tense in brackets - I think it's inconsistent how it is done in some places and not others, although they do stand out. That's up to you though.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
So gracefully sad and honest, and many beautiful lines. Really nice work.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
I love this. Beautifully written. Do I need to say anything more?
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| Imaginary Strangers chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Wow, that was really sad. But it was so packed full of emotion, it just was wonderful. I loved the imagery andf feelings the flowed out of this poem. Great job.